Week Five
“It’s a Boy” image by Olivia Ballmann.
Week Five: February 20, 23
Hours: 13 (Sick day on February 21)
Total Hours: 86.5
For week five I continued working on editing my articles for HealthFocus and Wellness Wave. I also worked in Constant Contact to make additions and edits for our March Newsletter. I also helped Megan deliver magazines to an office at the hospital. The office also held a baby shower which gave me the opportunity to network with other people at the strategic communications department.
Sample Work: For this week, I've attached the second draft versions of my TidalHealth MyChart and Dr. Manueti Immunotherapy articles. I've also attached the March newsletter which was started this week (finished, revised and finalized on week six). For the newsletters, I’m unable to share rough drafts because of how the Constant Contact program works, but I wanted to include the final version, which was finished next week. All these assignments took several hours; I really wanted to make the most of my time and take time to check for errors and mistakes on previous drafts. This week Megan gave me edits for the Mansueti article, which was super helpful as I'm still just starting out at my internship. She taught me to really emphasize the selling points for patient care, focusing on accessibility and ease-of-use for the new versions of my article drafts this week. I provided a photo of her edits that she gave me after reading last week’s draft. I used these edits to guide me moving forward this week. I spent time researching, waiting, and analyzing SU SIMCenter responses as well.
These are photos of Megan Koester’s edits from the articles I wrote last week. She gave them to me to guide the new versions of my article (above) this week.